I suppose I should have thought more about this “week-long” plane ride (including today’s strip) that I criticized the other day. I might have recognized that Rivera extended the flight for the entire week to suggest the lengthy flight, itself. However, there was nothing in the dialog or body language of Mark and Rusty to reinforce this interpretation. Now, there were several ways to portray a flight. Rivera chose an approach that focused less on the plane and more on conversation, ignoring flight attendants, drink service, and looking out of the window.

The blowout of Mark in panel 1 is a nice way to focus on a person talking inside something (like the plane), while looking at the thing’s exterior. The panoramic view of a plane landing at LAX is also a good compositional idea, though it suffers from crowding too much text along with an extraneous owl in the panel. The chosen view also seems too close to suggest the expanse of the airport. Emphasizing the airport by showing it from a greater distance would reinforce the idea of airport. I think the Theme Building would still be recognizable from a greater distance.

I find it interesting from the point of view of tempo, that the landing scene in panel 1 suggests a somewhat fast-moving tempo. But that tempo disappears when we return to the inside for more Trail Talk.